What is your concept?
Escape.What do your textures/objects represent?
They're very literal, as though strewn on a desk.
Explain the reasoning behind your composition.
I want it to look natural and candid.
Discuss color use, focal points, visual elements, formal structure, etc.
I want to contrast hard and soft by laying dark elements over pastel ones, and the ribbon creates a leading line throughout the image. By layering things precisely, I can make them look as though they naturally go together (e.g. the rose/ribbon/garter).
Feedback:
Some of the black elements look very photoshopped/stuck in
Think about why the piece is composed the way it is, the reasoning behind each object's placement
Think more about what you're trying to say
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